The Gloom
- Joseph Wiegand Bruss
- Jun 4
- 1 min read
Take a line of iambic tetrametre you wrote in the Larkin exercise and write a poem of three four-line stanzas. Originally published in January 2023
Everything sucks during the hours
When skies blanket in dark blue mist
After a few heavy showers
The sun peeks through the trees amidst
Of which the tops glint pale true green
Against the silhouette of skies
Some white structures blinding between
Only time which we feel alive
Tall trees they groan against the wind
Harmony of my life today
The smell of rain is on my mind
I'm ok


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